How to Write a Comedy Screenplay: Humorous Lessons from Bridesmaids

Scribe Meets World is back! (And a little miffed that Bridesmaids, last year’s R-rated comedy blockbuster, didn’t win an Oscar for Best Original Screenplay. I mean, really. Woody Allen’s already accumulated enough golden statues.

I never planned on watching Bridesmaids. I’m not actually one for crude humor. But I have to admit, I was intrigued. The gross-out comedy grossed $169 million (domestic), which was completely unexpected. Hollywood insider Nikke Finke was so convinced Bridesmaids would be a box office bomb, she even promised to stop reporting on the box office altogether if the movie made more than $20 million. Well, for all of us who like to read her slightly snarky scoops, thankfully she was granted reprieve from Universal Pictures.

After reading about the hoopla on Deadline Hollywood, when the Bridesmaids DVD went on sale, I thought, okay, I’ll give it a try. Plus, I had your interests in mind too—I thought watching such a successful comedy might yield some screenwriting tips.

Turns out, it was a good decision for both of us. Bridesmaids, starring Kristen Wiig as Annie, an inept Maid of Honor for the wedding of her best friend, Lillian, played by Maya Rudolph, was a lot funnier than I had expected. I laughed more during it than any other comedy I had seen in 2011 (or 2010). Plus, I did learn a lot of comedy script tips by watching it. Don’t worry, they’re not raunchy. You can apply them to comedies of all types, not just the R-rated ones.

So onto the comedy writing tips I learned by analyzing Bridesmaids:

More comedy tips, please!

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Hi all–

Thanks for visiting Scribe Meets World. Regular readers know that my blogging schedule is erratic, despite my good intentions. Due to another project (not related to screenwriting), new posts will be infrequent (this may be a euphemism for nonexistent) until mid-February.

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I’ve also just launched a Twitter account for Scribe Meets World. Follow me at scribesworld where I’ll be tweeting pearls of screenwriting wisdom and slaying screenplay demons, all in 140 characters or less.

In the meantime, keep on writing!

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Unique Jobs for Screenplay Characters

Today is the second part of a post where I examine the approach screenwriters should have when choosing careers and jobs for their screenplay characters. The first part examined if your hero really needs a job–fictional characters are lucky enough that their bills still get magically paid even if they don’t put in their 40 hours. Even if his professional life doesn’t play a huge role in your plot, your hero’s job can achieve other screenplay goals like: increasing story stakes, creating irony and showing personal growth.

Sadly, most aspiring writers get lazy about which job to choose for their characters, and opt for one of the following: lawyer, aspiring actor (or model), ad executive…and god forbid, blogger! Choosing a more unique profession for your characters is an easy way to make your screenplay stand out from its competition. But where to find these unique professions? And what to do if you’re main character cannot logically be anything but a lawyer…actor…or model?

Gimme more screenplay tips!

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How to Choose Careers for your Screenplay Characters

Recently, I reviewed the body switching comedy The Change-Up, written by screenwriting duo Scott Moore and Jon Lucas, who also wrote a movie called The Hangover. Perhaps you’ve heard of it? The Change-Up starred Jason Bateman as a lawyer about to make partner who switches bodies with his slacker best friend, Mitchell, an aspiring actor who just scored a role in an upcoming porn film. The movie didn’t do so great at the box office, despite its comedic pedigree. One of the reasons has to do with the main characters’ professions. Lawyer and actor — how many times have we seen these careers on screen before? Although these particular job situations have comic potential, and I can see why the screenwriters used them, they didn’t feel fresh.

So it got me thinking…what kind of approach should screenwriters have when choosing a profession for their protagonists? My answers are divided into two parts. Today’s post addresses whether or not your main character actually needs a job and what kind of screenplay objectives can be accomplished with a character’s line of work. The second part will give you ideas on where to look to find unique jobs for your screenplay characters, and how to add some originality to your character’s profession…if his job is not so unique.

Show me the money!

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The Change-Up: Box Office Analysis

Today’s analysis is all about The Change-Up, the R-rated raunchy comedy starring Jason Bateman and Ryan Reynolds. It only made $37 million at the US box office, which is why it qualifies for Scribe Meets World latest feature, Box Office Blues, where I take a look at why some movies underperformed at the box office and how you can avoid the same pitfalls.

The comedy’s poor showing at the box office is surprising. Its stars are funny, not to mention good looking. It was written by Scott Moore and Jon Lucas, the screenwriting duo behind the comedy juggernaut, the Hangover. That’s not all. The Change-Up was also directed by David Dobkin, who also did a little movie called Wedding Crashers…the number one R-rated comedy–until the Hangover crashed the Wedding Crashers’ box office party.

This is quite the comedy screenplay pedigree, on par with having the Coppolas involved in your drama script. But somehow, The Change-Up, a comedy where family man and lawyer Dave (Jason Bateman) switches bodies with his slacker best friend Mitch (Ryan Reynolds) didn’t heat up the box office, despite a premise ripe with the potential for comedy gags. If you’re aiming to break into Hollywood with your own R-rated comedy, you’ll definitely want to know why. Let’s take a look:

Box office succes will be mine!

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How to Write a Murder Mystery: Whodunnit Tips from Gosford Park

If you’ve ever read a well-written murder mystery, the chances are you’ve also entertained the idea of writing one. But how exactly do you go about it? What should you be keeping in mind as you plot your own murder mystery? Gosford Park is a murder mystery artfully written for the screen, which garnered 7 Oscar nominations, including Best Picture, Best Director, and Best Original Screenplay. The movie did indeed take home a little golden statue for a screenplay written directly for the screen, beating out Amelie, Memento, and Monster’s Ball, so it’s clear there are a number of murder mystery tips to be gleaned by studying the movie.

More on mysteries, please!

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Something Borrowed: Box Office Analysis

We’re starting a new feature at Scribe Meets World. It’s called Box Office Blues. Catchy, no? Basically, I’m going to examine movies that you’d think would do really well at the box office, but for some reason or other, tanked. By studying what went wrong in those movies, your own screenwriting skills should improve. If you have a suggestion for the Box Office Blues series, please say so in the comments. To kick off this new feature, I’m going to analyze Something Borrowed, a romantic comedy which had a lot going for it.

Gimme more movie analysis!

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