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How to Write a Script Outline: the 8 Major Plot Points

How to Write a Script Outline: the 8 Major Plot Points

Plot is THE driving force of your screenplay, so it’s essential that you spend time on your plotting skills when you’re writing a script outline.

You can create the most interesting character in the world, but without an equally interesting plot, the audience will not want to spend 90-120 minutes with that person.

For example, many people find Charlie Sheen’s current 2011 self-destructive spiral interesting to read and gossip about. But would they want to spend an hour and a half of their lives watching him swill alcohol, do drugs, and oogle women?

I think not.

But give Charlie boy a goal–perhaps to rejoin Two & a Half Men, the successful sitcom he was kicked off of–while he overcomes his addiction to alcohol, drugs, & women…

…and that, people might watch because they’ll want to know if he can pull it off. Maybe not something they’ll pay $10 to see, but as a movie-of-the-week on TV…why not? (Although I suspect there are some film executives who think Charlie: 3D would be quite the blockbuster…)

Since you want to know how to write a script outline, let me clue you into the dirty little secret about plot:

With rare exception, all movies have the SAME structure.

Yes, you heard me correctly. A thriller like the Bourne Identity has the same structure as a family comedy like Toy Story.

No matter the story or its genre, each one has 8 plot points that you have to hit. And once you know these 8 plot points, writing a script outline and a full screenplay becomes infinitely easier because it’s no longer you vs 120 blank pages.

You’re writing towards a goal instead of blindly.

I strongly recommend that before you write one word of your screenplay, you spend time reflecting on these 8 major plot points. They will form the backbone of your script outline. Plus, it’ll save you time and heartache in the long run.

So without further ado, here they are:

Your Script Outline — Plot Point #1: Opening & Closing Images

The first image introduces your story to your audience, so make it a good one! Ideally, the first image is a visual representation of your entire story, especially its theme.

Your closing image is your last contact with your audience, so make it strong. A good closing image, like the spinning top in Inception, can even change our interpretation of the entire ending.

How to Write a Script Outline: Closing Image: Inception

The closing image from Inception

It’s probably best to decide what your opening and closing images are going to be after you’ve got a solid draft under your belt and have a clear understanding of the theme you’re trying to convey.

I must give credit where credit is due: I didn’t spend too much time thinking about opening and closing images until Blake Snyder mentioned them in his screenwriting book Save the Cat (which I highly recommend).

Your Script Outline — Plot Point #2: Inciting Incident

The inciting incident is that event that changes the course of your main character’s life. If the inciting incident didn’t occur, your main character would’ve taken another path…and you’d have an entirely different screenplay.

For a post dedicated to this special plot point, check out The Inciting Incident: Definition & Examples. And if you want to read a comprehensive, fluff-free guide dedicated exclusively to the inciting incident, click here!

Your Script Outline — Plot Point #3: First Act Break

The first act break marks the end of your set-up: you’ve introduced most, if not all, of the key characters.

We know about your main character, his goal and the obstacles he faces. He’s done his prep work, and now he’s ready to go.

In a lot of movie plots, the main character has to go on a journey in order to achieve his goal. Because of that, often times, the first act break involves a physical location change. For an example, read screenwriting tip #2 in Writing a Comedy Script: Tips from The Hangover.

Amateur screenplays are notorious for elaborate first acts that are simply too long. Although there are no hard and fast rules, this break usually occurs between pages 25-30 in your screenplay. Keep that in mind when you’re fleshing out your script outline.

Your Script Outline — Plot Point #4: the Midpoint

The midpoint, as its name implies, is the at the middle of your screenplay’s second act. It changes the entire direction of your story.

For example, in a “good vs evil” type story, the good forces have experienced setback after setback. But at the midpoint, something happens that changes their fortunes for the better. For the first time, success seems like a possibility.

In a comedy or drama where people of different personalities are thrown together, the midpoint marks the moment where they stop seeing each other as enemies, usually by accomplishing a minor, but important, goal together.

Your Script Outline — Plot Point #5: the Point of Commitment

The point of commitment is where your main character reaffirms his commitment to his goal. It’s another plot point that I didn’t think much about until I read Viki King’s screenwriting book, How to Write a Movie in 21 Days.

How to Write a Movie in 21 Days by Viki King

According to Viki, the point of commitment happens around page 60 of your screenplay. At first I was skeptical, but then I started looking for it – and lo and behold! – it was there, just as she said…usually clocking in 60 minutes into the movie.

I wouldn’t spend too much time on this plot point when writing your script outline, but because I’m personally interested in psychology and human motivation, I think it’s an interesting point to include. You’ll often discover you already wrote in a point of a commitment in your screenplay, even if you didn’t consciously intend to do so.

Your Script Outline — Plot Point #6: All Is Lost

At this moment, your main character has experienced an extreme setback. He’s the farthest he can possibly be from his goal, and it seems impossible for him to accomplish it. This moment usually marks the end of Act II.

To learn about the three essentials to crafting the perfect “all is lost” moment, read this article, or, for a more detailed writing guide, read Trough of Hell: How to Wrap Up the Middle of Your Story with Maximum Impact.

Your Script Outline — Plot Point #7: the Climax

In the climax, your main character has gathered his resources (both internal and external). In this final showdown, he will test his mettle against the antagonistic forces that have thwarted him from achieving his goal.

If he has a tragic flaw, in the climax, he demonstrates that he has overcome it. All the lessons he learned during the second act will pay off in the climax.

Your Script Outline — Plot Point #8: the Resolution

Ah, we’re almost done!

If your screenplay has a happy ending, the resolution is the best part for your hero. He gets to enjoy the fruits of his labor. His world is in balance again.

How to Write a Script Outline: the Happy Ending in the Resolution

My kind of a screenplay resolution…

If your screenplay has, shall we say a more European ending, the resolution is bittersweet for your hero. He might not have accomplished his goal, but somehow he’s still in a better place than when he began his journey.

Final thoughts on your script outline

If you need help to create a script outline of your own, try one of the action steps below:

  • Download The Ultimate Structure Worksheet. It contains questions and checklists designed to help you easily construct a script outline. Best of all, it’s absolutely free!
  • See the 8 essential plot points in action. Read this article to see examples of the 8 essential plot points from Lord of the Rings: The Fellowship of the Ring.
  • Read Chapter 11 of Write Screenplays That Sell by Hal Ackerman. As a whole, this screenwriting guide is filled with solid advice. Chapter 11, which reveals Ackerman’s “snowplowing” plotting technique, is especially helpful.

…and for a long-term solution…

  • Break out the index cards. Watch a great movie and write down its plot points, one by one. If you’re pressed for time, use a list of plot points from my archives. Write each plot point onto an index card. Divide these index cards into columns, so that the last card in every column is either a major turning point or an act break. If you do this regularly, you should develop an intuition for screenplay structure that will make plotting your own screenplays and writing a script outline ten times easier.

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What do you think? If you were writing a TV movie based on Charlie Sheen, what would your script outline look like?

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Dave June 2, 2011 at 9:56 am

What nonsense !! How would you apply these rules to such landmark films as 2001, SOLARIS (tarkovski) or David Lynch’s LOST HIGHWAY ,,,

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scribemeetsworld June 2, 2011 at 10:48 pm

Dave,

I can understand your indignation. It seems like I’m trying to stuff the magic of a story into a segmented little box. But that’s not my intention at all.

First let me say that these are guidelines, not rules of the “thou shalt not kill” category.

Secondly, knowing these plot points in your screenplay makes it a lot easier to navigate 100-120 blank pages because you’ve got goals to write towards. They also prevent your screenplay from having an aimless plot, which drives most readers crazy.

The point of Scribe Meets World is to help aspiring screenwriters sell their screenplays (without sacrificing their artistic integrity). Since most produced movies and screenplays that have sold recently have these 8 plot points, it makes sense that a spec you’re hoping to sell would have them too. At the very least, you should be able identify these points to studio executives because they LOVE them.

Now I haven’t seen 2001: A Space Odyssey or Solaris (to borrow from Joseph Conrad, “the horror, the horror,”) but I find it difficult to believe that movies which are such classics lack a climax or a resolution…

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James February 18, 2012 at 7:10 pm

Both films, “2001: A Space Odyssey” AND “Solaris”, as they are both brilliantly and successfully plotted non-traditionally and more unlike your 8 plot-points, they both do have a climax and a resolution. In “2001: A Space Odyssey”, the climax is when the protagonist realizes he is suddenly locked out in space out of the mother ship, when the artificial intelligent robot machine that verbally controls the ship through voice commands will not let him re-enter the ship, electronically, so his resolution is to enter the mother ship through the only reliable means, his back-up manual entrance, against the robot’s verbal commands, which upsets the robot, and then he decides to shut down the computer robot system altogether, permanently, ultimately delivering the message that humans can never put complete trust into any computer machine to be in charge of their resources for survival, that only humans can be in charge of that manually. In “Solaris”, the climax occurs when everyone on the space ship, except for one, is plagued and had dies by the cosmic disease while stationed out in space over a billion miles away from Earth. The protagonist is one of the plagued, but he is still alive. The lone survivor decides to return to Earth and escape the cosmic disease. But the protagonist’s resolution is that instead of taking the option to go back to Earth with the lone survivor, he accepts to remain behind, as he has fallen in love with the physical manifestation of a beautiful human female that the cosmic airborne disease has created for him, which has removed him completely from his reality into a physically altered dimensional state of mind to live with her forever while trapped in outer space over a billion miles away from Earth, and that is where the film ends.

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James February 18, 2012 at 5:37 pm

These brilliant 8 plot points are NOT nonsense AT ALL, Dave, you stupid ignorant half-brained moron! You don’t even know crap about how to even begin to write a successful movie script, so SHUT THE HELL UP!!! Only a complete jack-ass mindless idiot like YOU would come out and make such an irrationally preposterous and brainless juvenile comment like “What nonsense” to an obviously well-structured lay-out description of 8 plot-points for a movie script!!! You are obviously a complete pathetic ignorant with not the slightest rational sense of comprehension! Your brain cells cannot even process logical and rational information even clearly spelled out for you right in your face that you instead resort to react like mindless African savage baboon! The screenplay expert who posted these well-constructed 8 plot points NEVEr said anything about applying these plot points to every single film there is and has ever been made out there in world! The 8 plot points are a general structure of plots that is commonly applied to MOST films, not an exact blueprint to every single film ever, you idiot! You don’t even have to copy exactly every 8 plots as they are, as you can minus one or add an extra plot and makes certain changes in each plot structure, as well, which is how you get to write and create such amazing non-traditional films like “Solaris” and “The Lost Highway”! Use your head, at least what’s left of it, before you decide to say or post something so stupid and so ignorant like, “What nonsense!!” YOU are the one who is complete and utter nonsense and the load of absolute ridiculous brainless crap that comes out of your stupid ignorant mouth is what is total NONSENSE!!!

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jason stong December 20, 2012 at 12:08 am

To the person who posted the original 8 points..it really opened my eyes. Ive been writing for years, mostly jibberish if u ask me, songs, comedy, lately the beginning of a script that I thought might make america laugh like we all need to some days..but I didnt know hiw to put it together. Thank you. Im clearer now. And no matter were it goes. Your knowledge was helpful and guiding. Never let someone like the negstive people who write on the bathroom walls ever chamge whats in side of you..they get what they need in your reply..thanks again

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scribemeetsworld December 20, 2012 at 1:52 pm

Hi Jason,

Thanks for your comment. This is the kind of feedback which keeps me motivated! I wish you the best of luck with your comedy script!

PS: You might find these posts to be helpful:
Comedy Writing Tips from the Hangover
Raunch-Free Script Tips from Bridesmaids

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Bruce Tritton June 26, 2011 at 11:38 pm

I absolutely love this blog. It is all I have been reading since I found it a couple of days ago.

Ignore Dave. He is one of those ‘artistic’ types who value style over substance.

I read one quote from this type that absolutely flawed me,

“Steven Spielberg is too audience driven to be a great director.”

It’s like saying,

“This hospital is too patient driven to be a great hospital.”

I am a newbie but it would seem to me that the audience should be you number one concern. Artistic types don’t seem intelligent enough to grasp that your blog is about great guidance, not set in stone rules.

I have read many of your posts and have then analyzed the screen plays I am currently working on. I am seeing a lot of mistakes that I didn’t notice before, thanks to your great blog.

Many many thanks Scribe :)

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scribemeetsworld June 27, 2011 at 11:50 pm

Hi Bruce!

I’m so glad that Scribe Meets World has helped you with your own screenplays! That’s what this website is all about.

Your observation, “audience should be your number one concern” is spot-on. If you write with this as your guiding principle and familiarize yourself with screenwriting basics, your spec scripts will be way ahead of the pack.

Your support is very much appreciated, and if there is a particular screenwriting issue you’d like to see addressed in a post, please let me know through the contact page or in the comments.

Good luck!

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Amy Suto December 1, 2011 at 2:46 am

This article changed my whole outlook on screenwriting. Structure is exactly what I need to focus on! As an aspiring screenwriter, this website has helped me beyond belief.

Just wondering, have you ever heard of Script Frenzy? It’s a 30-day competition in April for screenwriters to write an 100 day script, and it is incredibly motivating. I did it four years ago, and I’ve been hooked ever since.

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scribemeetsworld December 2, 2011 at 12:13 am

Hi Amy,

Thanks for visiting Scribe Meets World– I appreciate the kind feedback!

I have heard only positive things about Script Frenzy, although I have never participated. If you can dash out a script in 30 days, you have a great rough draft to work on in the following months. That’s often the hardest part, to write pages that you can work with and mold into something really great. I’m glad it’s helped you stay motivated!

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claraspeak January 11, 2012 at 5:17 pm

I agree with Bruce. Films should be all about emotion. At least in my opinion. I put these plot points to the test and sure enough, they´re all in the blockbuster movies!

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scribemeetsworld January 11, 2012 at 10:34 pm

Hi Claraspeak,

Thanks for visiting Scribe Meets World! I’m glad you put these plot points “to the test.” While I like to think all the posts here are helpful, they are much more so when you actively engage with them and use to them to analyze movies and/or your script in progress.

One of the drawbacks of being a screenwriter is that you work so hard to cultivate an analytical eye so that you can assess your screenplay and fix its errors…that you often can’t just sit back, relax, and enjoy a movie. Depending on a movie and how eager I am to see it, I’ll make a conscious choice to turn my analytical mind off and try to just enjoy the movie for its own sake, at the least the first time around. If I think I can learn from it, I try to watch it a second time and look for clues to its success (or lack thereof).

Of course, this isn’t very efficient, but this way I get to be a satisfied movie-watcher and screenwriter all at the same time!

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James February 21, 2012 at 5:11 pm

That does not make those blockbuster movies great just because they contain the 8 plot points. Limiting your screenplay story to just these 8 plot points makes your story become too predictable and reduces many possibilities of it becoming potentially innovative, unique, and original, which is one of the main goals to writing a good script. Too many of these blockbuster movies are too predictable and lack a great compelling story, because they depend too much on the 8 plot points by revolving the story around the plot points, instead of the other way around, making the story become bland, typical, weak, and boring. At the end of the movie, you go home feeling uncompelled, unemotional, unmoved, and unsatisfied, all because the screenplay paid more attention to mechanical structure than a compelling and artistically creative story, where most of its attention should have been.

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James February 20, 2012 at 6:20 pm

“But would they want to spend an hour and a half of their lives watching him “SWILL” alcohol, do drugs, and “OOGLE” women?” Oh, I THINK YES!!! As a matter of fact, DEFINITELY YES!!! And you have to be quite a moron of a human being to actually think NOT!! “Oogle” women!? “Oogle”!?!? Ha ha ha!!! LMFAO!!! Yeah, interesting choice and interesting USE of a smarmy juvenile pseudo-terminology that you place such out of context here and one that does NOT exist in the English language.

First of all, whoever the mindless idiot who cooked up this preposterously irrational statement about Charlie Sheen, Charlie Sheen does NOT “oogle” women, you moron. That is your ridiculously idiotic and despicable sex-negative media-brainwashed juvenile fake term for pretentiously romancing and seducing women! Charlie Sheen does NOT “pretentiously” romance and seduce women! He realistically, honestly, and maturely, AND successfully romances and seduces women like a true intelligent educated right-minded and mature REAL man does in REAL life, so cut the crap with portraying the idea of romancing and seducing women into sex as some type of bad thing or something, because you sound like a complete brainless idiot, and nothing could EVER be further from the truth!

That’s what differentiates Charlie Sheen from other men. Charlie Sheen is a real man, unlike too many pathetic childish feeble-minded wimpy idiot guys out there, who are NOT real men, who, instead of properly seducing and romancing women the way they SHOULD be doing, biologically, instinctively, and intellectually, by Nature, the way all-out-success Charlie Sheen does, resort to surrender to the pathetic ideological perversions of abstinence, marriage, monogamy, commitment, exclusive on-on-one “missionary position” sex, and stomach-turning pseudo-moral crap, like the push-over pansies and cowards they are, right before their mentally sick and degenerate radical feminist sex-phobic delusional monogamist-crazed skank women who control them, which 8 out of 10 times always results in absolute misery, torment, suffering, and regret.

That is why Charlie Sheen is better than those push-over pansy coward loser guys and why he is a total success in his career AND in personal life, despite that whole media fabricated charade of nonsense that bullied around him in the news early last year, and YOU are so feeble-minded enough to get sucked in by the lies and the bull crap cooked up by the ignorant sex-negative media around Charlie Sheen, to have the nerve to write up that incredibly idiotic and very false statement you wrote up here against Sheen. But, you just keep sucking up to the bulls**t, right!?

“Swill”!?!? Ha ha ha!!! LMFAO again! Wow, you really are easily sucked in by the media-fabricated bulls**t! It’s incredible to see how some people are just so easily manipulated by publicized lies and exaggerated facts. For your information, just like charlie Sheen does NOT “oogle” women, He also does NOT “swill” alcohol! He DRINKS alcohol, just like any other normal sane right-minded person who drinks alcohol, and as far as doing drugs, so what!? He may do are may have done drugs just like any other person who has done who did NOT become addicted NOR sick from it.

Contrary to your irrational opinion, if the real Charlie Sheen were turned into a movie, realistically, people would WANT to see a good amount of Charlie seducing and romancing several women, many of them simultaneously, as the romancing and seduction of women by both men AND by other women are always one of the highest and greatest fail-proof natural selling ideas for movie plots that always succeed, and that is a fact, as well as they would want to see how he deals with the situation and dilemma of his career at that moment, but should the romancing and seduction of women end at some point in the film, the whole plot and story would be ruined and crumpled to pieces! The rest of the story wouldn’t matter much anymore, because he most compelling aspect of the character’s persona would be gone. The story would collapse, and the film would surely turn out into a total financial flop at the box office.

Who Charlie Sheen is as a character and as a real person, as a charming alpha ladies man who always romances and seduces many different women with power, charm, intelligence, and wit, almost always successfully leading to great passionate uncommitted and unrestrained meaningful sex, and who is financially wealthy and independent with a good solid career, is EXACTLY the character that people DO WANT to see in Charlie! Otherwise, his character and the story becomes uninteresting, unrealistic, and very boring, and it’s not Charlie! So, YOU got it ALL wrong to have the sick nerve to actually resort to the mindless thought that somehow people would actually NOT want to see Charlie Sheen being himself, being a real man. And as far as seeing Charlie “swill” alcohol, that’s another one of your media-fabricated out-of-context mindlessly stupid and ignorant terminologies of pointless negative judgment you are attempting to utilize again for no good reason.

The interesting part of the journey aspect of the plot would NOT be Charlie Sheen trying to make his way back to “Two And A Half Men”, because that may not be what he wanted. Maybe he did not want to go back to “Two And A Half Men”, and even if he did, his normal sane rational human behavior of drinking and seducing women, the way MOST people in the world do and the way ALL people should do, by naturally intelligent human biological fact, has absolutely nothing to do with his loss or his losing out from returning to the show.

As a matter of fact, it’s Charlie’s occasional excessive drinking and his dedicated passionate commitment to seducing and romancing women into passionate meaningful sex that made him the great celebrated and loved character that everybody wanted to see, his seductive passionate sex with several different women he recently met being far more meaningful than the ever-so-tragic meaningless committed monogamous love-based sex his brother Allen had, the little he ever got throughout several years, with his then psychologically neurotic sex-negative crazy feminist bitch ex-wife, Judith, and all that is which made a large part of keeping the show together for almost 10 years.

Actually, a better plot to the life of the real Charlie Sheen would be if at some point he gives up pursuing his return to “Two And A Half Men”, because he realizes it’s not worth it anymore, but the drinking, the doing occasional drugs, and especially the romancing of women part of his character always stays intact, because THAT is what people WANT to see, not just in Charlie Sheen but in many male AND female lead protagonist characters, so cut the ridiculous childish nonsense with making the beauty of drinking and seducing women out to be a bad thing, in some strange bizarre way if even possible, by using stupid smarmy pretentious terms that are completely out-of-context and juvenile such as “swill” and “oogle”, because you sound like some sick religiously perverted sex-negative sycophantic feminist-supporting pseudo-moral-crazed degenerate. Drinking alcohol, getting drunk, and romancing and seducing women into sex are ALWAYS a good thing, and THAT is an unequivocal and an inarguable fact!

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James February 20, 2012 at 9:54 pm

And BTW, romancing and seducing lots of different women on a regular basis every week non-stop or as often as one needs and desires is NOT an addiction, not by any means, whatsoever, and never does it EVER become an addiction! So, do NOT ever place the constant glorious sexual pursuit of many different women into the same category as the constant pursuit of drugs and alcohol, like some despicable sex-negative jerk, because sexually pursuing after women constantly is clearly NOT the same as constantly pursuing after drugs or alcohol! What are you some kind of sick disgusting sex-phobic misogynist religiously perverted creep!? Apparently, you think you can come out here on public internet and self-appoint yourself as some type of elect who gets to dictate how much sex and how many women people can have sex with, including when is too many women and too much sex!?!? You’re kidding, right!?

The constant sexual pursuit of women is NEVER an addiction, because the constant sexual pursuit of women is how humans survive, not just biologically, but how we survive, emotionally and psychologically, as the normal healthy functional and very rational behavior of sexually pursuing women constantly is a biological human necessity that comes directly from Nature, NOT to procreate, but to achieve the constant sexual gratification that the human body needs on a regular basis in order to alleviate the testosterone and estrogen levels that help people become physically and psychologically stable enough so they can actually carry on with the world, and that balance can only be achieved with true equilibrium by having lots of sex with lots of different and new partners on a regular basis, always constantly searching for new partners when necessary!

There is NEVER a limit to how many different women one can have sex with, and however many different women you have sex with never becomes an addiction! That type of despicable way of thinking, where the constant sexual pursuit of many different women is somehow an addiction, is an ideological perversion and an imposed mental corruption. You do NOT put women into the same category as drugs and alcohol! Women are NOT a bunch of things labeled like shelf items NOR are they things that cary the same kind of potential risks and hazards as man-made products do, like you so disgustingly implied with your perversely stated corrupt ideology that Charlie Sheen should overcome his “addiction” to drugs, alcohol, and to “women”!

Women are NOT something you grow an addiction for! They are beautiful sexually enticing intellectual actual human beings who give birth to other humans of both sexes, who are the only reason you even exist, and whom we all, both men and other women, become emotionally and sexually aroused and passionate for to endless levels of needs and desires without limit! There is NO becoming addicted and there is NO “too much” when it comes to the sexual passion for women, and you do NOT get to dictate any conditions NOR terms on women, on our sexual desires and pursuits for women, and how we go about them, EVER, you despicable sex-negative creep, so get that ignorant religiously perverted and destructively corrupt ideology of “too many women equals addiction” misogynist judgmental bigoted stupidity and sack of bulls**t lies out of your sick head!

Too much drugs can lead to sickness and death. Too much alcohol drinking can lead to poisoning and death. Having sex with lots of different women does NOT lead to physical sickness NOR death, so having sex with lots of different women on a regular basis in constant pursuit is NEVER a problem NOR does it ever become an addiction, and neither you NOR anyone EVER gets to dictate how much sex and how many women one can have sex with!

As a matter of fact, people become physically sick and very mentally unstable when they are NOT having much sex or not having ANY sex at all! People also become physically sick and very mentally unstable when they are having very non-gratifying and miserable sex, usually one on a very steady decline, usually within a marriage, with one single partner and being psychologically trapped with and becoming less sexually attracted to as the years go by.

There is absolutely NO NEED for Charlie Sheen to stop sexually pursuing many different women, just as there is no need for ANYONE in the world to stop sexually pursuing many different women on a regular basis, whether you are a man or another woman, because always having sex with many different women on a regular basis is NOT a problem! It is the necessary biological manner in which we survive and live functionally, and it is always a good thing! You have to be religiously perverted and sick in the head brainwashed with such despicable moral crap to have the nerve to ideologically portray the natural sexual pursuit of many different women as if to be an addiction or some type of unhealthy behavior, when nothing could be further from the truth.

That being rightfully and factually stated, here is the real true rational question. Would movie viewers want to spend an hour and a half of their lives watching Charlie Sheen “swill” 12-step brainwashing ideological lies and bulls**t barfed out by so-called “experts” during supposed detoxication programs, watch him swill the same irrational and brainwashing despicable lies and bulls**t, such as the cooked up fabricated concept of “love over sex” and other ridiculously perverse lies and nonsense by the same degenerate manipulators who will try to convince him of the bigger lie that he is somehow some type of sex addict, then have the viewers later watch Charlie “oogle” some religiously corrupt sexually repressed pietist girl, one single girl, into the perverted bowels of abstinence, commitment, marriage, monogamy, and exclusive heterosexual one-on-one “missionary position” sex, until they both drown into the priggish gutters of their own misery!?

Do you actually think viewers are going to want to spend an hour and a half of their lives watching this!?!? Oh, I think DEFINITELY NOT!!!

And all for the random sake to just see if he can “pull it off”!? Pull WHAT off!?!? A stop to his drinking and his rational behavior and devoted pursuit of sexual passion after women, just so he can transform into a sexually deprived and psychiatrically miserable wreck!? MOST DEFINITELY NOT!!! That is something that is NOT EVER necessary for ANYONE to have to pull off!

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scribemeetsworld March 19, 2012 at 11:32 pm

James,

In response to your comments:

Oogle and swill are descriptive verbs with “punch.” That’s why I used them.

I agree, you don’t want to write a movie whose plot revolves around the 8 essential plot points. Your script shouldn’t be mechanical drivel–but you don’t want to write an unorganized mess either. If you utilize the plot points correctly, each scene will flow organically into the next one so that nothing comes across as forced.

“Heart” is also a script essential. If the audience doesn’t care about the characters in your script, then they won’t give two figs that your screenplay is perfectly structured.

I think that a movie focused on Charlie Sheen’s exploits (with alcohol and with women) would be one-note. People would quickly tire of watching such repetition (I’m referring to full-length scripts, not to a 20 minute sitcom). I think audiences prefer to see progress, to see characters changing into someone better (or worse) than they were at the beginning of a film.

But that’s my opinion and assessment of audience tastes. You’re certainly entitled to your own. You clearly have a lot of passion and a love for movies. Use this passion and write a screenplay–maybe about a character like Sheen or a “religious degenerate”–and see if any of the advice here is helpful, Charlie Sheen commentary aside.

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Sean August 31, 2012 at 3:50 am

Surprised you responded to James at all.

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tsilver July 2, 2013 at 3:10 am

So am I. Run on sentences and BS – I couldn’t even read his whole diatribe.

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austin April 2, 2013 at 4:31 am

You seem like a super cool dude. or dudette. either way, props to how you handled this james douchebag.

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scribemeetsworld April 2, 2013 at 11:25 pm

Hi Austin,

Thanks for visiting Scribe Meets World! James’s comments have generated a lot of commentary…which I definitely like. Free speech is usually a win-win all around. For the record, I’m a dudette :)

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Haakon Dahl February 25, 2012 at 6:13 am

Thank you for the excellent tips. I got here from story charts.ca, where I was motivated to go Googling for “Inciting Incident”. I’m very happy that Google put me here.

For what it’s worth, I find that a certain amount of pruning in comments can greatly improve the health of a website.

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scribemeetsworld March 19, 2012 at 10:46 pm

Hi Haakon,

Thanks for visiting Scribe Meets World! I’m glad you’ve found the site to be useful. I’ve checked out http://www.storycharts.ca — thanks for bringing it to my attention.

To further your study of screenwriting, I also highly recommend Scriptshadow (to learn more about the craft by analyzing real screenplays) and Deadline Hollywood (to learn more about the industry). Alex Epstein’s Crafty Screenwriting is also a real gem!

Pruning comments is certainly something to consider, especially as the site grows, but for now I’m letting the First Amendment reign!

After visiting your own website which definitely has a political slant, I wonder, have you seen the Ides of March? If so, what was your take?

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Hannah April 25, 2012 at 7:38 pm

No! Don’t prune the website comments! That might mean I would never have got to read James’ epic response!

Although, at first, I thought the guy sounded like a complete idiot (it never does anyone any favours to launch into a needless personal attack on someone they have never met) as I read, I was surprised to find he had some very intelligent points to make. I had never really thought of holding the likes of Charlie Sheen up as an Alpha Male hero, who goes against our learned social constraints and, far from being immature in his pursuit of sex with many different women, is actually being true to his biological nature. I had never thought of married men as actually weak for turning their back against theirs. Once I had deciphered his special style of writing, I have to say I agree with much of what he wrote – except the manner in which he delivered it.

I think in a perverse way, it kind of highlights the key message of the site about the need for structure, lean writing and sticking to the key points. Great ideas, great content, can be lost when presented in a poor form. Good form is crucial.

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scribemeetsworld May 1, 2012 at 9:22 pm

Hi Hannah,

Thanks for visiting Scribe Meets World! I’m glad you enjoyed reading James’s comments…you’re right. When you view them from an evolutionary biology perspective, they do make sense. Or at least more sense.

Good form is absolutely critical. The organization of your screenplay is as important as its contents. If you have any movies that you’d like to see analyzed on the site, please say so!

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Brooke June 2, 2012 at 7:46 pm

Hi,

Thank you so much for this site! I’ve gotten a lot out of reading it as I tackle improving my feature comedy script. As I’ve been trying to see the 8 plot points in my own film I keep coming up with a few questions:
1. You wrote that at #6 the character has a re-commitment to his goal. And I was wondering why here? Why would someone right after the midpoint suddenly reaffirm themselves?
2. At the act 2 break”All is lost” and then the next moment after the break is the Climax: I keep wondering, doesn’t there need to be an additional plot point that is very important in between? How can someone go from losing everything to suddenly having what he needs to succeed during the crisis/climax.

I would be so grateful if you could help! This script might kill me.
Thanks,
Brooke

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scribemeetsworld June 3, 2012 at 11:11 am

Hi Brooke,

Thanks for visiting Scribe Meets World! I’m glad it’s been helping you as your complete your comedy script.

Plot Point #6, the point of commitment, is something that I first came across when reading Vicki King’s How to Write a Movie in 21 Days. And after reading about it, I started noticing it in more and more movies–but it’s by no means something essential like a strong midpoint or climax. So if it’s causing you sleepless nights, I wouldn’t worry about it.

As to why it would come after the midpoint–a lot of times, the midpoint of a script takes the second act into a whole new direction. So it actually makes sense for the character to reaffirm his commitment to achieving his goal after the midpoint has shaken everything up. Also, it’s not like the character says right out, “I’m going to do this, and come hell or high water, nothing’s going to stop me.” But he SHOWS it.

The point of commitment might be a test to determine whether or not the character will continue on his journey–maybe it’s a temptation of sorts. At this point, it’s like the character has an “easy way out,” and usually, he’ll choose to stay “in.” You can see why the point of commitment is usually built into a lot of screenplays, because it’s a natural extension of the obstacle/goal/obstacle/goal sequence which is the backbone of plot. It’s just one in a series of obstacles, and by overcoming it, the hero shows his commitment to achieving his goal.

RE: the climax…yes, there are additional scenes between the all is lost moment and the climax. The essential plot points are like a checklist to follow to make sure that your screenplay has a solid structure. You’ll fill in the scenes between each one. The plot points make it easier to do so, because it makes your goal more manageable– i.e., okay, I just have to figure out what happens between the first act break and the midpoint…instead of, “ohmigod, I have an entire Act Two to write and I have no idea how to fill all those pages!”

Between the all is lost moment and the climax, something happens to make the hero rally and not give up on his goal. A lot of times, one of the supporting characters helps the hero experience a realization that he shouldn’t give up (like in Bridesmaids, Megan slaps Annie and tells her that Annie can’t give up when life has knocked Annie down). Then the character prepares for the final climax.

Going back to Bridesmaids, Annie prepares by getting her taillights fixed, baking a cake for Officer Rhodes, and by resolving things with Helen. Bridesmaids is about internal character transformation, so the climax isn’t a face off between good and evil (like a typical action movie or thriller), but about Annie coming to terms with her poor self-esteem. By seeking out Officer Rhodes and making up with Lillian, Annie demonstrates she’s overcome her internal demons.

I hope this helps–good luck with your comedy script!

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maz hughes June 19, 2012 at 4:08 am

Sorry for spam but just reading through the site – thank you scribe. Good words.

And Charlie Sheen 3D? Uber.

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Diana July 21, 2012 at 12:16 pm

James is either Charlie Sheen or one of his personal friends.

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scribemeetsworld July 21, 2012 at 2:20 pm

LOL, Diana!

I think I should set up a separate section just for comments on James’s ramblings!

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Gibs August 15, 2012 at 10:33 pm

haha, James, u mad bro? Charlie Sheen’s #1 fan…

Great site, just found it!

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scribemeetsworld August 21, 2012 at 1:46 pm

Hi Gibs,

Thanks for visiting Scribe Meets World. I’m glad to have Charlie Sheen’s #1 fan as a reader. Winning!

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Juergen Heinemann September 2, 2012 at 9:11 pm

Hi,
I’m relatively new to this site. But since finding it I have been on it non-stop! So thank you for all the helpful information. Now to why I’m here and my question. I am a writer slash film maker. Recently I was approached by a major holly wood producer about my work. So he now has one of my scripts. He likes it but said it was too “dense”. This eludes to what you have been saying about amateur scripts being too complicated and convoluted in the first act. I have read over the eight plot points; which was a big one with him. As again you stated that they are with Major Studio types. And I’m not really that far off. I feel with a bit of “sloughing” and a minor revamp I should be well to good. But my question is. do these eight plot points have to stay in this order?… I’m mostly referring to #6 All is Lost Can they be shuffled a bit? I’m not opposed to revamping this script. I’ve never been a “It’s my work and my baby” type of writer.

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scribemeetsworld September 4, 2012 at 7:41 pm

Hi Jeurgen,

Congratulations on getting a producer interested in your work! That’s a huge step–I hope you celebrated in style :)

In traditional three-act structure, the all is lost moment has to occur before the climax and the resolution. It can’t occur any sooner either because the protagonist has spent the entire second act preparing for that moment, but instead of claiming victory, he suffers defeat.

He’s the absolutely farthest from his goal, despite everything he’s done in the second act. Only by gaining new insight can he rally his strength for one last attempt in the climax. If your script has a happy ending, then he’ll also gain pretty much complete victory at the resolution.

So I guess the short answer is no–you can’t really shuffle it around. I’ve never been a believer in fixed page numbers, so it’s not like you have to have the all is lost moment on a specific page, but chronologically, it has to come before your climax and resolution.

First acts are hard to trim, usually because the writer is so focused on giving the audience background information. If the characters are interesting and the protagonist has a compelling goal, the audience will still follow along…even if they don’t have all the background info. Give them some credit–if they’re hooked, they can wait till act two for more details/explanations. Is there a character introduction you can delay till Act Two instead of including it in the first act? That might be one way to trim it down.

Density can also refer to how “lean” your writing is. Using fragments and fewer words will make your script feel lighter. Make sure none of your paragraphs are longer than four lines–and minimize overly long dialogues. But take this advice with a grain of salt. You don’t want to ruin the voice which hooked the producer in the first place!

Good luck!

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Juergen Heinemann September 5, 2012 at 12:11 am

Thank you SO much! Now that mu thoughts have had more time to “congele” so to speak. Im pretty sure I’ve got it down. :) thanks again. And your sight is awsome by the way.

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Nagesh irale November 25, 2012 at 6:04 am

Dear sir,
I want to prepare a story outline for a suspense film based on college student’s life.
Would u kindly help me in this matter.
I will be highly oblised if it could be possoble

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scribemeetsworld November 27, 2012 at 6:12 pm

Hi Nagesh,

I can’t give you specific help regarding your project, but I am planning to write a post which describes how to plot your movie from beginning to end. I think this will be helpful for you, and I’ll let you know as soon as it’s completed.

In the meantime, you might want to read Alex Epstein’s Crafty Screenwriting or Blake Snyder’s Save The Cat, as they both give helpful advice on this topic. Also, study the plot points for as many suspense movies as you can find. Taken isn’t a bad place to start!

Carson Reeves over at Scriptshadow has done several reviews of thriller scripts. If you go through these, you can learn a lot, not just from the post itself but also from the comments. Good luck!

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EA December 5, 2012 at 8:52 pm

Having just been getting my first invitation from a famous Hollywood director to write an outline for a story I suggested to him, I found this information very useful and it will come quite in handy when getting on to my first ever screenplay. Thanks for sharing great tips, looking forward to stepping into the moviemaking world!

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scribemeetsworld December 6, 2012 at 12:37 am

EA,

What exciting news! I’m so happy for you and glad that this post gave you some helpful guidelines. Keep in mind this article only describes the essential plot points; you’ll probably need more to flesh out your story outline. Hal Ackerman’s Write Screenplays That Sell will come in handy at this stage.

Good luck!

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LovePearls December 12, 2012 at 3:43 am

Thank you, thank you,for this. Plot points have set me straight. I have written them down and the journey begins…I do have a European Ending, but I hope it is strong enough to touch the audience as It touches me. Are there any examples of death being a better place? It is not morbid by any means, but it is symbolic to the resolution. My character is happy to meet his lost love once again. Any thoughts?

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scribemeetsworld December 12, 2012 at 8:52 pm

Hi LovePearls,

I’m glad this article helped you! Off the top of my head, Gladiator (which seems especially pertinent for your project) and Braveheart are both movies where the death of the protagonist made for an extremely strong ending. I don’t think anyone in the audience was complaining! If I think of others, I will post them here.

Good luck with your script!

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Greg March 25, 2013 at 5:17 pm

Smoke meth much james?

Anyways, so I see how these main points relate around a story where the hero is put into a predicament, has a series of setbacks, one setback is above all else, the worst. At this point something changes (I think we can all agree this is very resonating.) And in the end the hero triumphs.

So my question to you is… what happens if in our story there is a sense of hopelessness and the hero never suceeds and the light at the end of the tunnel never gets larger? Could the story be appealing if there is a climax but not a summit by the hero?

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scribemeetsworld March 28, 2013 at 6:12 pm

Hi Greg,

You always have to do what’s right for YOUR story. That being said, here are three thoughts to consider:

1) Real life can be hopeless enough. People go to the movies in part to escape that feeling. You might want to reconsider a completely bleak ending–just for marketability’s sake. If your hero fails, the possibility of a hopeful ending should exist for another character (however minor).

To quote Syd Field from his book Screenplay, “I once taught a workshop in Germany for some 50 writers, and out of 50 stories, 46 of them ended in death, suicide, mayhem, and destruction. I told the students that there are better ways to end a screenplay than to have your character caught, shot, captured, die, commit suicide, or be killed.”

2) Of course, a bleak ending may be exactly your point. The ending of Chinatown sure is negative–but that’s the whole point of the movie. The rich can–and do–get away with murder. If you can convey your point of view as well as Chinatown did, your script can be a calling card which can get you an agent and possibly assignment work–even if it’s not marketable enough to be produced.

3) People become immune to things the more they are exposed to them. For example, after awhile, if an action movie doesn’t pace its action scenes, audiences will stop feeling an adrenaline rush while watching them on-screen because they’ve become habituated to them. The same principle applies to a movie which leans towards the bleak side. If the hopelessness isn’t punctuated by happier, more hopeful moments, the bleakness will lose its effect and your audience will be numb to it.

In other words, there should be some success achieved at some point, otherwise the series of failures loses its impact. Two ideal points for creating a false sense of hope are a) at the end of Act Two and b) in the middle of your climax.

I hope this helps. Good luck!

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Julia May 21, 2013 at 12:07 pm

I really have to thank you for this amazing site! I come from germany so it’s kind of depressing searching for really good german sites that might help you with your screenwriting process. I’m glad i found sites like your’s which have been very helpful!

This article really inspired me and also helped me a lot. But I still got a few questions and hope you can help me!
I’m still in kind of a learning process when it comes to screenwriting, but I’m working passionately on a screenplay at the moment and I’ve already outlined every major plot point so I know what the story is about and what my lead character really wants etc. I also outlined the eight sequences of the screenplay. So my next step is to start writing a treatment. I’ve already done this before and I think it is quite helpful so I totally agreed with your article about treatment’s I’ve read earlier.
But I was wondering how much outlining is too much.

While searching for outline examples I found a development for a screenplay of a TV show. It was just for one episode so it wasn’t the whole story of the whole season of this show. But what really confused me was that every single scene was outlined and written as kind of a treatment. But there’s other sites where I’ve read things like “When it comes to screenwriting, just outline at least your major plot points and then get it done”. Well, I thought maybe it is a good way to outline the whole script so you’ll know what you actually want to write about. But then I thought if I outline every single scene I want to write in the actual script, I will spend more time outlining than actually writing the script.
So it kind of confused me a bit and I wanted to know how you yourself handle those outlining process. Because, I think it’s good knowing where your story goes and having the whole plot structured in those plot points, but like you said in another article about the 80-20 rule, the more you research the less you write, I thought maybe it’s the same thing with outlining. Maybe I wont get the script done if I spend too much time outlining.

Hope you at least know what my problem is and can help me a bit so I won’t be as confused as I am right now! :)

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scribemeetsworld May 21, 2013 at 9:04 pm

Hi Julia,

I’m so glad that my site has been helpful for you! In regards to outlining, I think it is an essential part of the process. I like to outline as much as possible because I find that this reduces the amount of extensive rewriting I have to do later. You do raise a good point though–you can outline too much and never start writing your screenplay in the first place. This defeats the whole purpose of outlining!

This is how I approach outlining: first, I focus on cracking the 8 essential plot points. Then, I figure out what needs to happen in order for those plot points to occur. I add in scenes to heighten the emotion or to improve the logic, etc. This usually yields a list of about 40 plot points or so. I put each plot point on an index card and shuffle them around until I think I have them organized into a solid structure. Then I think about each plot point–how it should begin, what should happen in the middle, and how it should end. If any funny ideas or lines of dialogue come to me, I write these down as well. I don’t write much; maybe one side of an index card, sometimes both sides. It depends on how extensive I think the scene will be. I do this until I have filled out each index card…and then I repeat the process a couple of times.

By this point, I’m itching to begin writing! I think that’s a good indicator of when you should switch from outlining to writing. You don’t have to add details to the index cards, but I wouldn’t start writing before I had a list of all the plot points organized in a way which best tells my story.

This is, of course, the method which works for me. Some people hate outlining and write “by the seat of their pants.” It sounds though like you are an outliner like me!

To clarify, in the article about the 80-20 rule, I concluded 20% of your research will yield about 80% of the details you actually use or need. So I resolved to research less. By research, I meant time spent looking up factual details, not outlining. In fact, in the same article, I concluded you should spend more time outlining rather than less! (But not to the point where outline becomes a procrastination device.)

I hope this helps. Let me know if you have more questions!

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GBlivins June 23, 2013 at 10:46 pm

I’m new to this site, but the ideas you post are timeless. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with the world. I especially found your Back to the Future notes very helpful. As for “James” earlier in this thread, I’ve found there are two types of screenwriters: 1) those who recognize that there indeed is structure to all great films and 2) those who think everything they write is flawless and if people don’t understand it or like it, they become pissed off and blame the world for their shortcomings. (And by the way, using 2001 and Solaris as examples only made your point stronger. Those movies never see the light of day without Kubrick or Clooney. Who was James kidding?)

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scribemeetsworld June 24, 2013 at 5:26 pm

Hi GBlivins,

Thanks for the kind words! I think once you realize how much time a solid structure and an outline will save you during the rewriting stage, you find these tools to be rather liberating than restrictive.

Can you imagine writing a film like Back to the Future without any kind of structural aid? Nightmare!

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IsaJoy August 11, 2013 at 2:46 pm

I’ll admit I pretty much hate outlining, but it makes the task of completing a screenplay much less daunting – and something that’s actually doable.

I find your website very helpful as I daily pursue my dreams of becoming a Hollywood filmmaker – so thank you!!

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Jill December 16, 2013 at 8:47 am

I just wanted to drop a note to say how much I am loving your advice! You offer up some great, concise tips for aspiring screenwriters. I am bookmarking your site right now. Thanks!

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scribemeetsworld December 18, 2013 at 10:52 am

Hi Jill,

Thanks for taking the time to write a comment! Your kind words mean a lot to me. Good luck with all of your writing endeavors.

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Robert March 21, 2014 at 2:37 am

Hello,

I’m also an aspiring screenwriter, and I just started at about this time last year. So far, I’ve completed four movie spec scripts, one TV pilot script (an hourlong drama) and I’m currently working on a sitcom.

I think this list is a GREAT help. Anyone who has done anything knows that you ALWAYS want to start off with direction, especially if you’re new to it. To just “wing it” is almost never a good idea. Just like many others, I understand that these are just some good guidelines to begin with and of course, the better we get, the more we may be able to deviate appropriately. Some folks turn something like this into an English project and that’s why it drives them crazy, but what they need to understand is that this is just so you can have some structure and know where to begin. This also allows you to break the script down and focus more on doing maybe 30 pages at a time rather than trying to figure all 120 out in one sitting or get to one spot and just be stuck because you have no idea where to go next.

Obviously, with more experience, again, you’re better equipped to deviate, and that’s another thing a lot of folks misunderstand. We as amateurs are not in a good position to deviate just yet. We often want to compare ourselves to seasoned screenwriters and that’s not a good idea. All we see is the finished product and if it doesn’t match closely with this format or similar, then we wrongly think that no structure was used at all.

While I’ll admit that it IS frustrating to sometimes see work out there that looks like it stayed FAR away from this and is sometimes just plain bad, the thing for us to remember is that we DON’T want to be remembered for that. In other words, it’s easy to see that it looks like someone was able to put a halfhearted effort into something, succeed and then figure that that’s all we need to do as well. We want to make OUR OWN names.

Sorry to get into all that, but I just wanted to thank you for creating this list. As I said above, I’m working on a sitcom pilot now and I came online to look up good ways to outline that. I came across this, and I’m glad I did!

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scribemeetsworld March 24, 2014 at 9:46 pm

Hi Robert,

Thanks for taking the time to share your observations. You’ve summarized the benefits of outlining quite nicely. Outlines definitely make writing a longer work more manageable…and save you a lot of grief in the long run.

It’s interesting to read article by authors who don’t like outlining, but tried to embrace it (for whatever reason). For the most part, they end up concluding that outlining in advance saved them a lot of time during the rewrite process…

You’ve been enormously productive in the last year. It sounds like you’d be a great asset to a show’s writing staff.

From what I’ve read, the structure of a TV show shares similar principles to the structure for a full-length feature screenplay, but it does have its own nuances. (So you’d have to adapt the outline presented in this article.)

For more specifics, read Successful Television Writing by Lee Goldberg & William Rabkin and Writing the TV Pilot by William Rabkin (if you haven’t already!).

Best of luck :)

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Amy March 22, 2014 at 6:21 pm

Great stuff!

Was looking to procrastinate from continuing with my outline so it’s always reassuring to know I’m not lost but on the right path. Inspired to get back to it!

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scribemeetsworld March 23, 2014 at 11:27 pm

Hi Amy,

Thanks for visiting Scribe Meets World. I’m glad to hear that this article inspired you to “get back to it!”

Good luck with your outline :)

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Bianca April 15, 2014 at 3:59 pm

I have a question.

So I’ve been trying to get at least a basic outline based on the worksheet you guys have, but I’m confused on what to do if you hero/protagonist’s main goal goes against everything your story is about.

For example: Say, your protagonist has an ability that can help people but hates it. So their main goal is to become ‘normal’ and ‘safe’. Yet there are all these conflicts that lead your main character to do the opposite on their goal–which I’m guessing is embracing their situation and ability.

If it’s like so, doesn’t that mean there are no stakes if don’t succeed their main goal? Or does it mean their main goal has changed??

I’m really confused….

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scribemeetsworld April 16, 2014 at 8:43 pm

Hi Bianca,

I haven’t seen it in a long time, but it seems to me that the plot of Spider-Man 2 matches the situation you’ve described. Peter Parker wants to reject being Spider-Man and embrace a “normal, safe” life, but, by the end, learns to embrace his superhero identity. Studying that movie should help you a lot.

Oddly enough, studying a movie like About a Boy may help you too because the “push-pull” struggle of the hero is similar, even though he’s not in possession of super powers.

To be more specific, Will (Hugh Grant’s character) professes an earnest desire to live alone, “like an island.” This is the equivalent of a protagonist who wants to be safe and normal. But Marcus won’t let Will alone; he forces Will to change and embrace life “like an island chain.”

I hope this helps. Good luck!

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Derek August 11, 2014 at 5:18 am

Thanks a lot. I believe an outline is to a scriptwriter what a business plan is to an entrepreneur. Your 8 plot points are a great breakdown of the classical 3 act structure and you have made my work very easy. Anyone who visits this site is blessed with some form of creative power, and as we all know, power is nothing without control. The control is in outline. I hope you don’t mind me mentioning you in my success story in a few years to come.

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scribemeetsworld August 12, 2014 at 8:31 pm

Thanks Derek for the kind words!

With your positive attitude, I’m sure success will come to you soon :)

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Marquise October 8, 2014 at 4:17 am

I just found it funny: As I watch Into the Wild by Sean Penn (2007) to write an analysis paper- I noticed that the movie practically follows this plot point outline almost exactly. After reading this I am much more confident in analyzing the significance of the plot points to the story. Thanks!

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scribemeetsworld October 8, 2014 at 7:21 pm

Hi Marquise,

Thanks for visiting Scribe Meets World!

It looks like your first visit is an example of what Julia Cameron calls synchronicity.

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samuel November 18, 2014 at 5:39 am

I don’t know how to start writing a screenplay I have a lot of images in my mind it comes as dreams at time thought at time vision I need help

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